It is a controversial an issue that governments should spend as much as money as possible exploring outer space(for example, traveling to the Moon ans to other planets). Some people may insist that the plan demands a lot of money and also, they want to spend money in other fields. Thus, they disagree with exploring outer space. However, I agree that government should put a lot money to explore outer space. First of all, the resource of earth is depleted-> will be depleted within 100 years-> +therefore we need alternaive source for our energy 같이 결론을 내주셔야 합니다. In addition, working for exploring outer space is difficult. Thus, unity for exploring space is necessary. -> 이 부분은 입장이 애매하네요.
First of all, the resource of earth is soon exhausted-> will sooon be exhausted. It means that another resource is demanded for survival of human life. some experts may insist that alternative technologies will save human life. However, many other experts and people believe that that technologies are short of saving over 6 billion people. Much time and a lot of money are indispensable because that technologies are at the first stage-> ??. Also as the modern socities are getting complexed-> complex, the pollution of earth is getting worse and worse. Thus, the-> (x) exploring outer space is necessary for searching a planet like earth which have a lot of resources.
-> body 전체적인 논리가 잘 이해가 안가네요 :)
Also, the unity between governments is necessaty becasuse working for exploring outer space is a difficult duty. For instance, the space station could be possible by working together-> through collaboration between Russia and U.S. Regardless of aggrement of the plan of exploring outer space. In addition, that plan needs a lot of money, high technology and many experts. It means that the exploring outer space is deeply connected to government`s power. Compared with other policies, the exploring outer space is a huge project. It means that only government could manage the plan.
-> 질문에서 어떻게하면 space exploration이 가능할것인가? 라고 물은것이 아닙니다. 간단히 말해서Basic needs와 Space exploration 중에 어느것을 선택해야 하느냐를 물은것입니다. 따라서 이부분은 Off-topic이라고 보여집니다.
In conclusion, government should put their money to explore outer space. First of all, the resource of earth is depleted within 100 years. In addition, working for exploring outer space is difficult. Thus, only government could control the huge plan. |