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Internet is very thankful thing which has made our lives easier and more comfortable. Actually, we can do anything with Internet. However, when people, especially younger generations, are too dependent on the Internet, it also has many drawbacks such as fewer chances to learn and meet personally and more errors in writing.
First, Internet makes us be less intelligent. When students are given assignments, what is the first thing they do? It’s getting on the Internet. Many of them just try to find the best one that fits for their assignments though they have other ways like going to library to find information from books. They don’t try to do their assignments by themselves because they can find everything in Internet. They should know that the easier way they carry out their tasks in, the less knowledge they get.
Second, Internet caused the youth of today to make lots of errors in grammar and spelling. Most young people chat on the Internet and send text messages in which conciseness and speed are more important than grammar and spelling. Some don’t even know the importance of correct writing because whenever they make mistake on spelling or grammar, an application immediately corrects the mistake.
Besides, people say that Internet played an important role in making a whole world into a global village and closed a distance between each people, but actually it didn’t. In fact, it made people live apart from each other. For example, video chatting has enabled people to talk with others just as they are facing each other. As a result, people don’t feel the necessity to meet in person, and they are cooped up inside their house.
To sum up, being excessively reliant on Internet causes various problems so we always have to use Internet in moderation. We should keep in mind that whether Internet is beneficial or harmful depends on you.
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