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It is evident that in our current society how to spend way of spending free time has a tremendous importance in our lives. Some people think that leisure industry will be amplified while others do not. I ,however, believe that people will have more time for leisure activities in the future. There are several reasons that I could discuss to support my argument so I will limit my discussion to the two that I feel are the most relevant to the topic. First, more leisure activities will appear. Also, automatic machines will replace human industry area.
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First, a lot of new activities will be created. Development of techonology shows us new world. A lot of new leisure activity activities appeared. It was possible because there were a lot of new techonology. For example, people could not enjoy variety of activities in the past which are now common such as paragliding, and skinscoober. Invention of how to fly, breath in water made these activities possible. These In these days, development of techonology looks like more faster than past. So,Therefore(So를 문장 시작할 때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) it will make a lot of new field of leisure.
Second, the time which people spend for their work will be decreased. Nowadays, we use a lot of computer program when we work. Some of the fields are even replaced by robot. These phenomenon will create remaining time to people. For example, according to the survey conducted by Seoul National University, it is revealed that the time we work for our task was decreased. Professor Kim, who conducted this suverey said that by using computer program, effiency of work was increased surprinsingly. He argued that the average time per week which we work decreased 70hours to 55hours during 15 years. In addition he mentioned that the reduction of work time will be fasted fast as time goes on.
For these reasons, I agree with the topic sentence. I think people will spend more time on leisure.
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