■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Being a leader is better than being a follower. Use specific reason, why? | |
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People commonly say that being a good leader is glorious thing, and the fact means that following someone is simple and unimportant to people in their entire life. In contrast to this social concept, I think that everyone needs to know that everyone doesn’t become a leader. The reason is that it required special ability to become a leader in certain area and the person should have control every result what he decide.
The first reason is that a leader in the certain area is very hard. This is because A leader should have many experience, leadership, various knowledge and even ability of treating people. As one representative in society, he should accomplish social goal by using powerful leadership and other people. For example, three days ago, a research shows that president’s support rate in Korea reached approximately 15 percent below. The reason is that he did many bad things and ignored mass media’s mention that criticizes his ability since he won vote of president. We all know though this situation how important selecting a leader who is honest and good ability.
Another reason is that the leader should have a responsibility to result from his choice even though it causes bad result to a certain group. Everyone hopes to be a leader who leads to a successful leadership and good result since leader gets fame and strong wealth but they should recognize adverse case, which leader who is lack of leadership brings about. For example, I had an opportunity to lead a group presentation in English class. As one group of leader, I should work out all of English presentation but many group members didn’t have enough time to meet to solve the problem. although we tried to make good presentation, it was very hard for me to control a group. as a result, we get the worst score in class and it makes me shamed because I didn’t the responsibility for failure. Therefore, if someone want to be a leader, the person should consider the responsibility for failure as a leader
To summarize, becoming a leader is difficult truth than which people have in common social concept. This is because a leader should have a lot of ability as well as is able to take responsibility for failure. | |
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