Some people may argue whether having jobs during attending school is good or not. Some think it’s not good for students because having jobs may disturb their studying. However I have a different idea. There are two reasons why I disagree with it.
To begin with, having jobs as students develops their senses of economy. If students just depend on their parents and take many things so easily, they may take everything for granted. In other words, students who don’t know how hard making money is may underestimate people’s efforts to make money. There is a great example supporting this idea. I used to work as a part-timer so I could know how hard to make some amount of money. But my brother didn’t work when he’s a student. After that, I made lots of money so I could go abroad to study, but he doesn’t even graduate his school, afraid of getting underpaid jobs. Thus, I believe that having jobs increases the sense of economy.
In addition, it helps students manage their time effectively. College lives are very busy, still there is free time. If students spend the extra time with useless things, it will be over before they notice. There are many books on successful stories of people. We can catch a common thing from each book. the thing is that they could manage time very well because they’ve learned how to prioritize in things to do. Most of the people had lots of things to do, so they had to learn managing time efficiently. They also mentioned it is important for making one’s life better. Thus, I believe it’s good for students.
I have come to the conclusion that having jobs as students is beneficial for them. There are still many students who want to have a part-time job due to many reasons. I hope that every student could get good experiences from their part time jobs.
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