It is often said that teachers are very important people for students to grow on the with right ways ( 이게 더 나을 것같아서 고쳤음)and so teachers have to be very intelligent. Some parents may oppose be opposed that teachers need ability to be related well with students because they believe teachers only should teach a subject for students. However, I believe that teacher’s ability to relate well with students(생략하는 것이 나을것같음) is more significant than the ability to give information. This is because like that teacher has ability for students to focus more in class than other teachers have and also they can develop friendship.
To begin with, teachers who possess ability to relate well having good relationship with students also have ability to lead students paying attention. (주어와 동사가 너무 멀리 떨어져 있는 문장은 좋지 않음)The first primary role of a teacher is to lead student focusing on his or her lecture because although the teacher is very intelligent, it would be useless students paying attention to the lecture. Also, relating well with student the good relationship with students means the teacher can communicate well with them (his students).(대명사도 이용해서 써주세요, 일일히 다 쓰기에 시간이 많이 걸릴듯) From my school experience, my 9th grade teacher, Mrs. Bae, was very friendly with us students (we나 us를 쓰실때는 반드시 독자를 생각해주세요, 우리라는 것이 한국식으로는 맞아도 영어식은 아니니까요) and so we all students my classmates loved her. Even, whenever someone had some concerns, she gave great advice. Because we loved and respected her friendship with students, all my classmates pay paid attention and participated more than any other classes.
In addition, that the teachers can teach friendship to students. School is not only the a place to study, but also the place to learn many kinds of social activities. And great relation between the teacher who relate well with and students can teach students many beneficial merits like friendship things of mingling and friendship better than others because with no barrier between students and teacher, they can communicate more things freely. According to a recent report from the Ministry of Education of Korea, students prefer to talk with the teacher ,who has very close friendship, to teacher who and do not listen to students and just teach a lesson. To sum up, teachers who have bonding with students is better than teacher who have ability to give knowledge because students more focus on the teachers they are familiar with. Furthermore, this kind of teachers can improve and teach friendship to with students. As times go by, students less respect teachers and teachers do not relate with their students. We should remember that teachers and students are very important relation and it has to be going along forever. |