These days, televisions has destroyedcommunication among friends and family. We prefer having communications with friends than watching televisions.(these
days 인데 present tense 넣으셔야되는거 아님?? e.g These days televisions are
destroying the communications among our friends and family..). However I believe watching televisions (티비들을 보는건??? T.V는 plural 이 아니고 singular 입니다.. )all day long makes two (귀찮아도 숫자말고 영어로!!) negative effects. (People spend time watching televisions, Children learn some violent stuff from televisions. 이 문장들은 2번째 문단부터 시작하는게 좋겠네욤..) e.g (2번ㅉㅒ 문단에서..) To begin with, people spending a lot of time on watching television.... 담에 이유, 근거 등등.
(3번ㅉㅒ 문단에서..) Also children can learn some violent stuff such as inappropriate words from watching television......이유 근거.
To begin with, people spend too much time on watching television so therefore they can’t have enough conversation among friends and family. When they watch television, they always concentrate on watching television. Young students often watch televisions as soon as school finishes. Parents will wonder why they are watching televisions so much and soon they will also be addicted to watching it which makes they cannot have enough dialogues between parents and offsprings.
On top of that, television teaches ( tv 는 3인칭이니까 s 를 붙여야 겠죠??) young children bad languages. I loved watching American dramas like the Detective Monk and the Simpsons. (Simpsons 가 드라마인가염?? ㅋㅋ) And I easily found that there remains so many swear inappropriate languages vocabularies and expressions which are really harmful to children’s emotion. Recommending these kind of drama to my sister is not acceptable for me because it would cause my sister swearing in English or think about swearing. And such are refrained from my sister because she can learn those word and imitate them.
In conclusion, I’d like all of you to check how much time do u you spend on watching television and find out how many bad expressions you can realize Family and friend’s bond will be gone if you keep watching it and all communications you can do are just staring at television with your family and friends like silly people. |