It is often said that the government has to invest money in practical research rather than every parts of science research. Some people may oppose this statement because after all every parts part of science is very helpful. However, in my opinion, the government has to invest money in pragmatic areas of science. This is because we do not have to squander the amount of money, and we can strengthen the efficiency of research.
To begin with, if we invest money in practical research ,we do not need to waste money, and we are less likely to dissipate the country's money. For example, when I was an elementary school, Korea suffered from IMF IMF라는 것은 시대를 나타내는, 우리나라에서만 사용하는 용어입니다. 에세이에 IMF라고 쓰면 IMF기구가 한국을 직접적으로 괴롭혔다는 말이되므로 suffered from IMF 보다는 suffered economic depression이라고 하는게 맞습니다. The time was very hard to korean people. So, the Korean government had to save certain amount of money. For this reason, the Korean government had to invest in intensive research of science such as definite plans and indispensable subjects. After all, the korean government can save a lot of money. And then, a lot of countries such as japan and china imitated korea's strategy. It indicates that intensive investment 집중투자를 의미하시려는 건가요? is very useful to save a lot of money.
In addition, we can increase efficiency of science research. According to the Ministry of Science of Korea in 2007, they announced that practical investment was a good choice better choice rather than investing in all parts of the investment. They experienced the difference of investment in their works. Fist, they invested in money all parts of science. But, it is not good to increase the effectiveness of investment. Secondly, they invested in money essential areas if science 뜻 불분명. As a result, it is an advantage to strengthen profits. Studies have indicated that practical investment is useful to increase effectiveness.
body2는 Ministry of Science 너무 과장되게 신빙성이 없어요 ㅎㅎ
지어내시는건 좋은데 좀더 구체적으로 지어내셔야지,
전분야에 투자했더니 효과가 없었고 필요분야에투자했더니 뭐 효과봤다 이런내용은
그냥 주장의 반복일뿐, 아무리 사실이라 해도 설득력이 없습니다.
또한 여기서 body1과 2의 구분도 명확하지 않아보입니다 :)
To sum up, though everyone may hold a different position in this issue, I am in favor of my idea that investments in practical areas cannot compare with every parts of science research. The main reasons are that we can strengthen the effectiveness, and save a lot of money
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