It is often said that getting a university education is the most important factor for success life because whether people take university education or do not is a deciding factor to judge one's knowledge. However, I believe that outside experiences such as part-time job and travel have significant roles in success for two reasons : broaden one's view of life and learn the importance of money.
outside experiences가 모호한거같음. 학교외 활동이 더 중요하다는 거같은데 extracurricular라고 하면 넘 고딩때 교외활동스럽나...
→ However, I believe that the experiences out of university such as traver or play more significant roles to succeed one's life for two reasons: it brodens the view toward the world and enables to learn the value of money.
To begin with, non-academic experiences^^ can allow young students to broaden view of life. <thinking way→ways of thinking. Through this process, they can understand diverse cultures, people, and customs. Thus they can become more open-mind and reduce their prejudices.>>
It makes students become more open-minded and have less prejudices to expose oneself often to situations, for example, to people with diffrent point of view.
For instance, my one friend→one of my friends who went to an international high school had an Ethiopian female friend at the time. She used to eat homemade food in lunch. As Ethiopia traditional food smelled not good and she ate it with her hands, many students disliked her. However, because my friend are accustomed such customs because he had lived in Africa. Thus he understood her behavior and became her friend.
For instance, one of my friends had lived in African when he was young. He went to an international school after, and he met an Ethiopean girl eating her food with hands. Most other students thought it is not normal, but he understood her behavior more easily because he already knew it is normal to eat wih one's hands for some people in Africa. With his unique experience helped him to be more open-minded and be friends with her as well as making everyone understand her culture.
In addition, part-time career can be beneficial to students. It is obvious that earing money in youth can learn the value of money and realize that nothing is free in real world.→난 이해하는데 문맥상으로는 이해못할듯ㅋ근거미약 Therefore, students who have part-time jobs is likely to have a sense of financial responsibility. According to the Ministry of Education of Korea in 2008, two groups put in a project that the correlation between part-time experience and financial sense→이럴때는 그 두그룹의 조건도 말해주는게 좋겠음. The result shows that the group which haved members with job experience in school had higher salary and better job position thatthan the other group that consists of people without job career.
In addition, in the success of life, the money takes an important role too. And job experience indeed gives the idea of the importance of money to university studetns. In this sense, having a part-time job can be an essential factor for a successful life. The Department of Education and Human Resource of Korea made a research of the effect of part-time job to university students: the students with job experience at least 3 months had better scores on economic quiz than the studnet with no job experience. It shows that the job experience does give certain financial ideas to university students.
High education may help succeed one's life but I think there are other factors more crucial. To succeed, one must have experiences out of the school to get larger point of view and understand the importance of money. Thus, I disagree with the statement that university education is the most important factor for a successful life.
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