Nowadays, employing and being employed is one of the most important issue in the world. Finding jobs are getting harder and level of unemployment is increasing rapidly. And in this situation is what will happen if business hire emplotees for their entire lives. It will exacerbate not only condition of the whole economy n the country, but also the situation of single Business. Therefore, businesses need to care their employees but not should hire for employees' entire life. In most of countries, one of the biggest problem is overpopulation. Increasing in birth rate and dereasing in deathrate cause boom in working population so that there are not enough jobs for them. So people are trying to put themselves in much higher level in such things that as education, experience, and activity. There things They promote competition that ameliorates productivity. However, if businesses employed all their employees for their whole life, then employees would no longer try to improve themselves. Also, they might not work as hard as before. Less diligent and industrious worker will damage the business. Workers who do not have to worry about being fired are less productive with the exception of elected afficals, government workers are often hired with a low rish of being fired. Businesses are often driven by profit. They need to make money or they will go bankrupt, guvenments, however, are more stable than private companies. In the process, government accure ? large deficits. If government did not offer its workers so much job security, employees would be motivated to work efficiently.
Organization이 다소 엉뚱한데, body가 하나밖에 없는건가요? 보니 decrease of work efficiency에 관한 내용 하나밖에 없는것 같습니다. 서론에서는 whole economy와 single business에 미치는 영향을 얘기하겠다고 해놓고서 decreased work efficiency에 관한 내용만 쭈욱 나열하면 앞뒤가 안맞아 보입니다 :)
Organization, coherence, unity는 굉장히 중요한 요소입니다. 10~20점의 감점요인이 될 수있습니다.
The examples above support the arguement that business shoul not hire employees for their entire lives, people often need external motivation in order to stay productive. By not hiring workers for their entire lives, businesses will force employees to work hard or risk the possibility of being fired. This policy will increase the productivity of both the businesses and the workers. |