Some parents might believe that computer games have some benefits for children’s brain activity. They think that if children play the computer games properly, it would be fine. However, I strongly agree that playing computer games is a waste of time. Thus, children should not be allowed to play computer games that even if they can handle their playing time appropriately. Playing computer games prevents children from doing other things, such as, homework, house chores and hanging out with friends. Also, once children start to play computer game, they easily get into addiction.
First of all, playing computer games hampers children from doing something more constructive since it takes children’s most of time (inappropriate expression). Computer games make children to focus on only that and they might spend all of their time to play games. They do not fully grow up to manage their time efficiently. So, once their parents allow them to enjoy computer games, they easily fall into the games even they and they even might forget their homework and house chores Moreover, we easily can see the arguments that happens between parents and kids because of computer games. Children want to play (General expression), parents absolutely make children to stop playing games (specifically talks about playing games, does not match with the former expression). Even worse, children’s behaviors and schedules are destroyed by the computer games. I believe the computer game does not have any benefit for children. It is definitely a waste of time and their valuable time that should be used more constructive ways.
1.(what about when they are able to manage their time properly? you have talked about this in the intro therefore you might need to elaborate more on it.)
2.(보편적으로 house chores는 아이들이 하는 것이 아니므로, 아이들이 해야하는 house chore로 알아듣도록 구체적으로 that을넣어 설명하시던지 어휘를 변경하시는것이 좋겠습니다 :)
Additionally, playing computer games leads children to becoma addicted to computer games since children are so vulnerable to such situations. If children fall into the computer games, it is too difficult to escape from this addition. I have seen several times in the news and heard from neighbors about young children who play computer game all day and night without break, eating and any social activities. As a result, they are isolated from family, friends and society. Many cases show that computer game addiction is widely considered serious social problem. It is not just a waste of time, it would be a waste of one’s whole life. The more they play computer games, the more they will be passive and isolated from real life. Thus, parents should prevent this happening and never allow children to play computer games.
good development.
In conclusion, computer games seem to be positive impact on children. However, there are many problems with playing computer games. It will definitely destroy children’s valuable time and make children to become addictive to games that will bring out irreversible results. |