It is controversial whether the government should not allow people to smoke in public areas. Although many people think that this regulation has a little effect on the pubic in that there will be no difference from now on, I strongly believe that since somking in public areas has a negative effect on others health, and causes many pollutions, the government must regulate smoking in pubic areas.
First, people who smoke in public area can cause others who don't smoke to suffer from some diseases. In especially,-> Especially, the second-hand smoke damages people's health more severely than smokers-> than they do to smokers. The pollutants that are caused by the second-hand smoke contributes to a development of various cancers, and this are still killing -> these still kill many people. There is no reason why people who don't smoke are suffering-> There is no reason for people who don't smoke to suffer from pollutants of smoking by smoker in the public areas.
Secondy, there are many environment problems that are related to cigarette buts.-> butts Most of smokers abondon them right after smoking because of the unpleasant smell and uncomfort of having them. If they smoke in public areas such as streets, roads and parks, they will throw it anywhere because they are reluctant to have them until they find garbage cans. Thus, this can have a negative effect on the public environment. In the case of parks, in particularly-> in particular, this can be the most factor-> a dangerous factor in setting the fire because of embers of cigarrete buts.
In conclusion, as I have just mentioned above, smokers should not be allowed to smoke in public areas in that letting them smoke in many pubic areas can threaten others health and play a negative role in environments.
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