Agree or Disagree?
it is important to have rules about the types of clothing people are allowed to wear to work and school.
In modern society, it has been controversial whether it is crucial to have rules about the types of clothing people are allowed to wear to work and school. However, I basically disagree with the position that wearing uniforms are important because forcing people to wear an-> a uniform makes it difficult for individuals to improve creativity and individuality; furthermore, it also makes people spend more money on the uniforms.
Most of all, having rules about wearing uniforms is likely to harm individuals’ creativity and individuality. As a matter of fact, uniforms are designed to promote discipline and obedience at work and school so that members of those society are encouraged to obey. For instance, when I was in high school, the school had the rigid dress code that all students must wear the uniform and even keep a certain length of hair. As an aspiring fashion designer, I hated the rules because I was unable to be distinguished among others wearing the same uniforms and express my talent into my appearance. From my personal experience, forcing fixed dress code prevent people from developing their creativity and individuality-> which부연설명을 더해주면 좋을것 같네요 which can be certainly fostered by stylizing the way we wear.
-> 아주 좋네요
In addition, the rules about wearing uniforms are waste of money because uniforms for students and workers are extremely expensive in Korea-> the question doesn't specifically ask within the boundaries of Korea. 따라서 없는게 더 자연스럽습니다. It is open secret that there are some dirty-> dishonest, corrupt connections.-> This needs a little bit more detailed explanation. Since there are no public bidding process and no option to choose a seller for those who need to wear an -> -> a uniform, people have to spend more money on their uniforms. On the contrary, thanks to the fast development of technology, there are a wide variety of clothes with good quality and reasonable prices as well. For these reasons, I firmly believe that it is not beneficial for people to wear the uniforms since people cannot have opportunities to choose not only cheaper but also better ones.
To sum up, I strongly support with the idea that wearing uniforms at school and work is not crucial because forcing people to wear an uniform makes it imposible for individuals to improve creativity and individuality; thus, it also causes people spend more money on their uniforms.
튜터님 항상 감사드려요~이번에도 잘부탁드립니당