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Most of the parents think that television shows are for entertainments. However, there are also lots of people who believe that watching educational program is more beneficial in learning. There are three reasons for that. First, teachers in educational program are very similar with teachers at school. Second, videos are more comprehensive than words. Lastly, we can remember programs in television better than in books.
To begin with, teachers in educational program are very similar with teachers at school. Books may have lots of information and explanation, but, unless they have a teacher to teach, it won't be useful. For example, when a student reads a book about chemistry, he would have some problems understanding about atoms. Then, he would definitely go to the teacher and learn about it. Educational program can do the same thing too. It makes them review the topic. In addition, teachers at school sometimes use educational program as school source in their teaching.
Second, videos are more comprehensive than words. For example, when studying mathematics in text. Printed numbers in books cannot show you how it has been done. Even if it shows how, you will frequently experience numbers coming out of nowhere because you cannot understand thoroughly. While in education program, it shows you every step, from the beginning to ending. Moreover babies can prove that video is more comprehensive. In folding a paper, baby won't able to fold it by reading books, but would able to fold it by following the video.
Last of all, we get to remember programs in television than books. For example, when a boy watches president Obama's speech through News, he would able to remember the speech and the presidents face. But, when we read it in the book with Obama's picture, we would soon forget it because words are hard to memorize. When we are babies, the last thing we learn is reading. So, remembering the text would be hard. And, he would also forget the face of the president easily because he would be seeing the picture just for a second.
Watching educational programs isn't waste of time. Parents may think its nothing special, but educational program is actually more comprehensive and easier to remember than reading the book.
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