o(->O 처음 시작 맞죠?)ften times, people fare(face 쓰셔야 되는거 아닌가 모르겠네요) a situation where that they have to make a choice. w(->W)hen they do so, they will consider various conditions. c(->C)hoosing(여기에 왜 choosing이 있는지 모르겠네요. 영화나 TV 프로그램을 고른다는 말인가요?) how movies or television influence people’s behavior is no exception because there are plenty of ways to television or movies influence people, Among many ways, I think television or movies influence people’s behavior positively in that television stimulates people’s and watching movies or television provides a good opportunity for people to get together and have fun.(문장 너무 길어요. 님의 thesis는 따로 끊고 그 뒤에 supporting idea 넣으세요. 이렇게 되면 어디까지가 thesis인지 구별이 안가요.)
Fir(st빼먹으셨네요) and foremost, I am certain that people get stimulated by movies and television and they can improve their creativity level. Since movies or television offers very visually stimulating(명사가 들어가야 함. 그러므로 stimulus) and clear demonstrations about some topics, the audience can easily learn how to apply that information into their daily lives. For instance, I watch home and farden(???) channels a lot whenever I have free time, and I apply what I learned from television into my practical home chose and repairs. One time, I saw how to make a shelf by oneself, and I began to make one by my self adding up some decorations and color on the shelf. a(->A)s we could see above, lots of valuable information from media benefits people practically by stumulating people’s creativity and ability to apply knowledge.
Next, good movies or television programs provide chances to meet up with friends or family and gey realted(오타인가요?) while whtching(오타?) them. Becuase people thessdays(오타) have hectic and busy schedules all the ime(오타), it is very difficult to find some common topics to take about with family members of friends. In that sense, movies or television gives out good opprtunities for people to gather in one place and have a related and gun(??) time together. My friends and I love watching sports programs. w(->W)e try to get together in a house and watch the shole game together while talking and drinking beer. and. we applaus a good sports plater and scream together, thus letting the steam off from stress and pressure form our live.
In conclusion, television and movies influence people’s behavior a lot, so that people could enhance their creativity while applying beneficial information into real situations and could have an enjoyable time with friends and famialy by having some common topics to talk about. By doing so, people get a variety of benefit and lead their live to better conditions. In this sense, plenty of positive points can to anticipated from movies and television |