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Some people say that people want to have other people to make decision for them to rather than making their own decisions; however, others disagree with this. Although each has advantages and disadvantages, I personally agree to with the above statement for two reasons. First of all, students could get useful academic information by their teacher. Also, the older people could give the young a productive advice based on their own experiences.
To begin with, teachers could help their students to reach their academic goal by giving useful information. The reason is that most students do not have exact knowledge about their field. Based on my experience, when I was in high school, I got stressed a lot to prepare an entrance exam like Korean SAT, the performance exam and portfolios. I had no extra time to make portfolios which were one of qualifications to apply the university that I wanted to enter; therefore I thought that I should change my major into another one. At that time, my design teacher gave me some way to make portfolio easily but great, and gave me useful information about diverse the colleges of art in Korea.
In addition, when young people have difficult problems to solve for themselves, the older people could give helpful advice to them. This is because, the older one have a lot of information on real life through their own experiences. According to the recent research, sixty- seven percent reported that they are much easier to solve problems by talking to older people like parents, teachers or bosses than to try to solve problems by themselves.
In conclusion, it could be seen that students could get useful information by their teacher. Moreover, it is more likely for young people to solve problems easily when they talk to older people. Concerning the above two reasons, it is evident that the people disagree with the fact that people prefer having other people to make decision for them are mistaken. / 320자
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