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An intriguing topic of discussion at hand is whether people learn more by watching television than by reading books. The answer to this question can vary greatly, depending on the individual perspectives. Thus, the jury may still be out, but as far as I am concerned, I agree with the statement. In this essay, I will present two reasons supporting my standpoint as follows.
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First of all, people today are greatly affected by mass media. This is attributed to the reason that contemporary people have no luxury of the not enough time to read book, in other words, they require themselves to know instant information, so it is uneasy to procure a large amount of information in limited span through reading books. According to a the recent report by the National Research Center of Korea, the average amounts of books undergraduates read a year are 1.2 volumes.The reason why they don’t read books is that it needs too much time to read a book thoroughly.Moreover, studies shown show that students think that learning a specific area by means of books is not efficient methods. Students are able to find a myriad of information through program in television such as news which contains a wide range of information. In this sense, it is evident that watching television is more beneficial way to learn.of learning.
On top of that, most books don’t contain up-to-date information that people need. The underlying cause lies in the fact that it costs a lot to reprint new version of books. Take my high school years as illustration.When I took a sociology class, teacher gave me an assignment about the gender wage gap in Korean society. At that time, I had no enough time to complete my project perfectly, for finishing to finish this, I visited Book-gu library which placed in near my house. However, the books regarding gender wage gap dealt with old figures, as a result, I couldn’t complete my project. It did not help me to write my report. It followed that I had to go back my house. If I had not go to library, as much as I did, I would have a chance to finish my report more efficiently.
In conclusion, I strongly argue for my standpoint on account of the two reasons mentioned above. Once again, although the verdict may still be out, I personally believe that two of my rationales above are sufficiently convincing enough to represent the viewpoints of a majority of people who are in faver of my claim.
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