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It is often said that spending time with friends who are similar to us is better than those who are different from us. Some people might agree with this statement because they make us feel comfortable and intimacy. However, in my opinion having a lot of friends who have various ideas is more important. There are a lot of reasons why I feel this way, but to make matters simple, I will shorten my discussion to two arguments. Firstly, it is helpful for us to erase remove bias. Secondly, it enables us to think in different ways.
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To begin with, making lots of friends who differ from us allows us to reduce our prejudice. It is obvious that being with them makes us to share their hobbies. For example, last year I joined a social clubs and made more than twenty friends there. One of them had a special hobby which was wind surfing. Before I talked to him, I thought that was very dangerous and people who liked it was reckless in life. However, it became my favorite hobby after I experienced wind surfing for his recommendation.
In addition, having conversation with different people provides us with various ideas. It is commonly observed that the more people there are, the more ideas exists. For instance, I had a chance to conversate have conversation with an American friend about War in Iraq. He and I had different opinions about the war in terms of religion, economy and politics. If I had talked with close friends who thought everything in my way, I would not have known in various views.
All things considered, making many different types of frineds is very significant for us. Not only can we reduce our prejudice, but also we can share diverse ideas. The importance of these benefits can not be underestimated to survive in a modern society.
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