주제-삶을 더 쉽게 하려고 개발된 기술들이 삶을 더 복잡하게 만들수있다.
찬성인데요. 이 아랫글에 올렸던 것처럼 body2 에 세부사항 문장을 못 만들었어요.. 어떻게 하는게 좋을지 좀 봐주시고 첨삭 부탁드려요.. 넘 다급한 마음이에요..........
I have a feeling that all the scientists are struggling to develop new technologies in order to make our lives easier and more convenient and everyone says so. I also truly appreciate them for trying so hard. However, I am sure that these new technologies can sometimes make our lives more complex because when everything is developing and changing so fast, some people can feel as if they are out of place, and everything will seem so complex for them. I also think that new technologies would not only bring good effects, but also bring some side effects which would make things more confusing.
To begin with, some people, especially the elders, would feel out of place and be puzzled because there are so many new technologies coming out every day these days. Developed technologies are changing the world and the lifestyles of people dramatically. Nowadays, we are living in a world in which technologies that were considered innovative and up-to-date last week can be considered old fashioned this week. Especially many elders try to think in their old ways of thinking and they can’t catch up with the fast-changing world. For instance, some elders don’t understand how computers or cell phones work, and some might even think that these devices have some kind of ghosts or gods in them. This can lead to a conflict because their ways of thinking can’t conform to their environments, and lives are being more complex for them.
Besides, new technologies not only bring good influences, but also can bring side effects. (세부사항ㅜㅠ)There’s a good example for this- escalators. By using escalators, we can move long distance easily without walking much or walking up the stairs, and this is why many people like using them- they are convenient. However, one side effect of this is that most escalators are built in a way which causes a lot of accidents and many kids get their legs cut because their feet get stuck in the gaps between each block. This shows that technologies are not always good.
To sum up, some people feel out of place because their ways of thinking don’t catch up with the new technologies, and they are considered old-fashioned. In addition to that, new technologies influence lives not only in a good way but also in a bad way. Therefore, I think that technologies developed to make lives easier can make lives even more complex.