■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : 큰 회사에서 일하는 것이 작은 회사에서 일하는 것보다 낫다. | |
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It is often said that working at a small company is more conducive rather than a big company. Although some people may agree with the statement above, I firmly believe that advantages of working at the big company is more important. There are several reasons for my opinion, of them, I'd like to describe two of the most ones. First, we can have a lot of chances to be successful, Moreover, the external environment is well developed.
Most of all, we can receive lots of opportunities to succeed. Granted, there are many competition whenever we get opportunities in large company but, this makes us have both better backgrounds and future career. For example, when I was in high school, I had a chance to join a intensified class. I had determined to take that class, after that my grade were getting better and better. In the end, I successfully passed a entrance test for a university. But my friend who hadn't taken that class was fail to enter the university. As a result, being a employer at a small company making it difficult for him to have a chance to succeed.
Moreover, not only do I have a chance to have a better career but I also work at better working atmosphere. Opponents may argue that small company offers their employer work at comfortable atmosphere. However, I think that the large company spend more money to improve their outward environment. This make their employer easily concentrate their project because the system is well developed. For example, the Seoul National University in Korea has shown that the outcomes which is related to their working environment. According to the study, the large investment gives a hand to increase worker's results. As a result, it is possible that the good external circumstance make us more efficient than the other.
In conclusion, I consider that working at the huge company is the best choice for us. If we work at big company, we can get a better opportunities to succeed. Additionally, we can work at better environment. Regardless of what other say, I think it is a good selection for us to attend a big company.
The more people realize this, the better their future will become.
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스피킹에서 외운거 적절히 변경해서 라이팅 템플릿에 끼워 넣으니 그래도 글자수는 어느정도 맞춰지네요.
이것만 해도 뿌듯 ^^
본문 2개 각각 한번더 결과를 쓰는게 좋을까요?? 아님 이대로도 괜찮을까요??
자료실에서 받은 템플릿에는 각 본문 마지막에 therefore ,,,,,,,,, since ,,,,,,,로 한번 더 결과를 정리하던데..
어떤 방법이 더 좋을지 궁금합니다.
역시나 마찬가지로 이정도면 22점 넘을 수 있을까요??
고생하시는 냐냐님과 그외 모든 분께 감사드립니다 ^^