As time goes by, people’s life style had got changed, and environment changed as human changed together. And now days’ environment makes human life longer than ancient people’s life. Among environment, hospital technology get developed. And people concern about healthy life more than before.
To begin with, quality of hospital, and medicine developed. Therefore, an infinite kind of medicine come out that human didn’t discover before, and doctor also learn how to treat people more about disease than ancient life. Also these days’ people can buy medicine from the pharmacy easily, so people can eat the medicine whenever symptom begins. For example when we see the African kids you can see many kids die because of disease.
Secondly, people care about their health more. But ancient people were busy to get the food, and worm up their body. However, now days’ people life is wealthier life than ancient life, so people try to care their health. You can see this all the time when you go to mall, you can see the product which is for healthier life, organic food, and when you go out you can see the people who exercise for their healthier body. It used to be big issue since people got more money and so until now too.
Some people might say people get more stress from their life, but it is just one side’s story. People actually trying to solve the stress from their life, and spend time to walk a while. By the way, it was the people’s wish that human live longer, so people’s invented hospital technology, and trying keep them selves healthy. That’s why people became live longer.
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