Nowadays, when you look at the TV monitor, or compouter monitor all about things your eyes encounter are various amount of advertisements. Some people think that advertisements have a lot of effects on us. I think, however, advertisements haven't improved our lives more better than before.
To start with, Advertisement is just for companies' benefits. What kind of advertisement you usually see? The most common subject is car, or TV, some foods, or so on. By looking these huge amount of advertisements, people are willing to buy that things which have appeared on the advertisements. That is to say, Advertisements are just appealing people to buy more and more products to benefit their company. Plus, they usually make a famous sports stars or popular singers, entertainers participate in the advertisements to attract more people such as Wonder girls, Big bang who is the famous idol star in Korea.
Second of all, Advertisement wastes vast amount of money. According to my thoughts about usual advertisements, the background of advertisement is usually about beautiful scene or fantastic castle or like attractive place. To make this perfect advertisement, people have to cooperate with many business who offered the beautiful backgrounds. Moreover, a famous star's body cost will be large, also. Therefore considering all these costs, making one advertisement will be difficult and need much money. But, around us many advertisements are made and it means people are wasting vast amount of money by making advertisement.
To sum-up, although many people like advertisements and have positive thinkings, I think advertisements is just for companies' benefits and wasting a lot of money. As a result, advertisement haven't improved our lives, I think.
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