It is often said that chidren should be occuped at all time and should never be left to their own device. Although some people may agree with statement above, I firmly believe that adventage children's freedom of doing what they want is more important. There are several reasons for my opinion, but two of the most ones are follows.
First of all, exessive discipline can not make them creative person. Granted, some people insist that children might be inpolite person without discipline. These day, many parents let their children can do everything wich they want. for this reason, a lot of children don't know what the courtesy is. But, I mean that parents should distinguish between freedom and license. For example, if children played computer game, even though they have a lot of homework, they would not be successful man. They can not think what should they do even in an adolescent period. Therefore, parents should restrict their children appropriately.
Moreover, children should be acknowledged not only expressing their opinion, but also making schedule by own self. Opponents may argue that they are so young that they can't dicide well whatever. However, I think that bad dicision is also important to make correct values. For example, mistake or bad experience can be good things, because after then they can be really mature people. According to the Seoul National University in Korea, most of successful people had experienced in their childhood, such as pevery, family trouble or health problem. It was fertilizer to make a big tree. Therefore, parents have to listen carefully children's insistence even if it is wrong. In conclusion, I think that children should not be occupied at all time and should be left to their own device. If they persist their own claim, they would improve creative thinking skill. Addiionally, relevant discipline lets children know courtesy. Regardless of what other say, I think it is about time that children do whatever they want under the appropriate regulation.
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