■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. You response will be judge on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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Topic :The best way to ensure for a good future is to plan carefully while you are still young. Do you agree or disagree? | |
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It is increased that parents start to prepare their children's future from an early age. They set their kids' goal and have them study a variety of areas such as English, piano, painting even before they learn their mother tongue . Some people object to this early education, but I firmly believe that those kinds of preparing for future have lots of positive sides. let me show you the reason I think like that.
First of all, It is more effective for children to be exposed to lots of fields because they can learn easily.
When childhood, children can absorb information more faster than grown-ups. So if a person start to experience various fields, especially the region he or she wants to study, the possibility to achieve the goal is bigger than who starts later although the goal is not set by themslves.
Second, planning improve the efficiency of preparartion.
whenever I prepare for my midterm or final exams, I always make a plan to study. that's because I can arrange what I have to study clearly and know what I should do first or later. If children know what they have to do, they will always remain it and reduce time-consuming works. Besides, it can help them when they have a hard time studying , their adolecent time. Finally, they can be further than other people.
In conclusion, children who have a dream and a specific plan to make themslves are likely to succeed in the future. The old saying goes, early birds can catch their prey more faster. This time is a really compatitive time. Although it is harder for children to undergo lots of things, it is clear that the advantages of early plans and prepartion far outweigh its disadvantages. | |
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