■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
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Nowadays there are many people who go back to their hometown or countryside because they are fed up with their busy life and environment pollution. They also want their children to grow up in clean and comfortable place like their childhood. Despite the fact that those kinds of people are increasing, I firmly belive that children should be raised in a big city. That's because of education problems and safety problems.
First of all, education problems are very important.
Of course, they may enjoy beautiful nature and scenary while they are growing up in the rural area. But in this competitive period, they have to experience lots of various things which are hard to meet in the contrysides. In a big city, It is much easier for children and their parents to have a chance of many education. If they really need a relax and nature, they can go to countrysides on weekends. And if they want to undergo lots of special experiences, they can use museums, galleries, and other festivals. But these are just a substantial things, not main things.
secondly, I want to tell about safety problems.
These days criminal rates are increasing and a lot of dangerous situations occur. I think that the countryside is more dangerous to our children because there are few people in there. For one, one of my cousins has gone through a serious accident when she was in the rural area. A kidnapper abducted my cousin. Fortunately, she could escape from him by a person who dscovered her. Even though there are criminals in urban areas, I think that Where many people live is much safer than other areas. | |
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