Some people in society think that people can benefit more from travelling in their own country than traveling to abroad. However, I have a different idea. When it comes to the statement that when traveling to foreign countries have more benefits than staying and traveling in their own country, I strongly agree. Here are two reasons why I feel this way: Experience difference and mature psychologically.
To begin with, traveling to foreign countries is good to experience different cultures, histories and sceneries. Normally, we just can see different countries’ pictures or videos through the internet, TVs or books. But However(But을 문장 시작할때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요)it is really hard to get real world of this those countries. However, when we go to foreign countries, we can experience their own life things style directly. For instance, visiting cultural attractions, museums or popular places to tour is one of the great benefits that receive from traveling abroad. Not only tour travel countries, but also people can get and feel their life style. It is difficult to experience foreign countries’ lifestyle in our own country. But However in foreign countries, we can live like them even though it would be a short journey.
On top of that, people mature psychologically when they travel in foreign countries. Traveling abroad needs big confidence because they are not familiar with their own county and also foreign countries use different language so they have a language barrier. It is tough job to travel and look around foreign countries with the language barrier. But However people can get the brave courage through this tough circumstance. Also it can be kind of the adventures for people, so it would be really helpful for people’s life. For instance, people should prepare the journey fully because of the uncertain situation such as communication problems or miss the correct directions. So Therefore(So를 문장 시작할때 쓰는건 좋지 않아요) before going to travel abroad, people should prepare fully and through this, people can learn how to do in unfamiliar situations.
To sum up, I have no doubt that when people experience different things directly as visiting foreign countries and mature psychologically while traveling to foreign countries, they get more benefits more than when people just travel in their own country.
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