■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Being happy with the job is more important than the high sallery. State your opinion with specific examples. | |
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As we move through our lives, we meet various values conflicting each other. Specially, in the case of choosing one’s job, money conflicts with his or her aptitude. Since we don't live twice, some people say that the job that gratifies one’s happiness is more important, while others say that the high salary is the first consideration. However, I myself strongly insist that the feeling of happiness and satisfaction should first be considered before anything else. It is because, the happiness can’t be displaced with the money and the satisfaction of the work may lead people to the success at last.
To begin with, we cannot buy happiness with the money. Let's make a simple question here. Why do we eager for the money? Why does the money seems to be above all the other values nowadays? It is because it easily allows people to feel a sense of well-being through buying and having such things. However, the point is that happiness orginated from money cannot give mental satisfaction but physical abundance. I once met a millionaire at a lecture in a small townhall. He was one of the Koreans who made the 'American Dream'. He had a splendid magnificent house in California and had a lot of money that was almost uncountable. However, the reason that he had left America, leaving all that noble life there, was that he was not happy. He could do almost everything with the money but it didn't ever satisfy his mental happiness. In contrast, while making lectures to ordinary people in small country, he finally could find the meaning of happiness. As we can see here, the money is not the answer for the euphoria after all. Doing what we really want to do right now is the fastest way to live hapilly.
Moreover, having a job in one's aptitude, affording the increased work efficiency, will lead him to the success as a result. Whenever we go through some works, we easily feel that the works we do like always come out with good results. Why is that? Here is an answer. I once saw a documentary making an investigation to workers at the age of 30s. The subject was the relation between people's satisfaction of the work and the quality of the outcome they have made. The result was definately clear. People of satisfying their jobs were better in making good results in various projects. It was because Jobs in their aptitude led them to feel satisfaction and gave motivations to work harder. Of course, after many years, there will be a great difference between the people getting motivations and not. Every famous people's success in their fields will definately be rooted from their love to works.
Needless to say, since our society is based on capitalism, the money is very important elements consisting our lives. However, the important thing is that the money cannot be in front of one's mental and also physical happiness. Therefore, to think of the value of happiness and the work efficiency alowing the success finally, there are no doubts to choose a job that makes you smile. | |
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