■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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It is often said that higher education should be available only to good students. Some people may be oppose that to statement. I absolutely disagree with that statement, too. In a this rapidly changing world, it is up to individual one's responsibility about their personal grade and how to accept the information well. Here are some reasons why I do do i think like that.
To begin with, the opportunity to receive give higher education for only good grade students, it wil be excaerbate the gap between good students and not good ones. Furthermore, the studnets given bad grades are able to lose their confidence because of feeling inferior studnets themselves.they might feel that they are inferior students. From my exeperience, when I was a high scool student, there was a system of to dived the dividing English class into a superb and lower class. At first, it seems more reasonable for the students who have eager to learn. However, after closer inspection, it is was not. Higher classes have more burden them down and students are under more depression because of heavy loads of school works. In On the other hand, lower classes make the studnets students who desire to study distract from noise. This viciouse circle worsen the both classes atmosphere.
Also, teaching to students eaqually equally gives a chance to favorable competition and benefits from each other.애매모호합니당 The difference of each grades should be estimated by how to pour their effort.much did they work hard. The learning process is up to individual in the end. It will be enhance their studying skills sharing the superior students and get spur to study to its fullest understand애매모호합니당. The good sutdnets get more confident and may have interested in stduying to teaching their friedns. In the end, it is more beneficial both of them.
To summurize, I definetely disgree with that higher education should be available only to good students. That organization is not fair. All of the students have right to learn equally even though they have poor capacity at in catching up their school work. The problem is personal endeavor after all.
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