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There has been an ongoing debate whether keeping old friends is more important than making new friends. Although it may true that making new friends is somewhat beneficial to in broadening the new experiences, I firmly agree with the idea that keeping old friends is much more crucial than making new friends because it is more comfortable staying with old friends and convenient in many ways.
The first reason for my opinion is that old colleagues are much comfortable to get along with because old friends have been seen each other since they when we were young. In other words, they can easily share the common experiences from the past and they do not have to spend time to get to know them each other while it takes long time to establish common background and not easy to talk tell the secrets when making new friends. Personally, when I met the old friends, even though we do not always continue the conversion, however, I really feel relaxed since we have been together for a long time. In this regarding,regard, it is much more time saving and relaxing with old friends than making new friends..
Another important reason supports this idea is that when you get in trouble or have a challenging moments, it is more convenient to ask old colleagues for help while than asking new friends for help is difficult to do. There are always time you are have to come though which can be lonely and hard to endure애매모호합니당, the only person that understands the difficulties and matters is old friends. For example, when someone gets in trouble to decide a career or is concerned about their collage life, old friend is always ready to listen carefully and delighted to help the friends. In addition, the old friends can give true and sincere advices since old friends know much better than new friends who can just give shallow and superficial advices to them. In this sense, old friends is are real friends who is are very helpful.
To summarize, I truly believe that keeping old friends is more advantageous than making new friends for the reasons that I mentioned above. With old friend not only we can talk more freely due to the comfortable circumstance but also we can discuss the matter in depth.
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