■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :All university students should be required to take history courses. Do you agree or disagree? | |
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Some people say that all university students should be required to take history courses. I disagree with the statement for two reasons. First, students should focus on their future career. Second, students are able to learn history in out of school.
First of all, students do not have enough time to take history courses. Today’s students should concentrate on their major and English. Besides, they have to get a variety of certificates in order to be a more attractive person than others. Truly, learning history may be beneficial for students. However, if they do not focus on their future career, they will have a hard time to get a good job after graduate. Let me take my university for example. According to the students’ interview in my school, most students participated on the interview answered that history class might not have an effect on their future. Moreover, they said that getting many certificates and developing English proficiency are better to get a good job. Nowadays, they are also getting degree in business as a double major, so they do not have enough time to take history courses. In this sense, students do not need to take a history class.
Second, history can be learned in other ways such as reading history books and the Internet. Taking a history class may be a good way to learn history easily. However, there are a lot of methods to learn history. Thus, students do not have to take history courses. Instead of studying history at a student, taking other classes such as arts physical training is more effective for students. For example, when I was a student in middle school, I was required by reading history books from my parents. As a result, I had a lot of knowledge in history and I did not take a history class. Besides, when I want to know and study history, I usually go online to search a variety of history. On the internet, there is a lot of useful information about history. Therefore, students can learn history by using these ways. This shows that students can learn history through reading history books and searching on the Internet.
In conclusion, I disagree with that college students should be required to take history classes for the reasons that I have mentioned above. First, students should concentrate on their future career like studying their major and English. Second, students should necessarily not learn history at the university. | |
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