■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words.
■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer
Topic : People today spend too much time paying attention to the personal lives of celebrities.
These days, we easily are able to see celebrities on TV. When we turn on TV, many famous people are shown, which are sports stars and actors, politicians. I strongly agree with the idea that people use their time to pay attention to famous people by watching TV. This is because people want to be a them on televisions and they hope their life will be better than themselves.
First of all, many people is exposed to television. This cause that they can know what is better life. Most people have hoped to be attracted person by doing something. Besides, they will want more comfortable lifes by watching personal lives of celebrities on televisions or reading newspapers . For example, I have a friend who have watched Korean dramas all the time excepting eating or sleeping. He said to me that actors and actresses on dramas might have a lot of money rather than average people. He really wanted to be a rich person because he went through hard time when he was young.
Secondly, we want to be a better lives as famous celebrities. In my opinions, as many people have went through hard time now, they want to obtain hopefulness by paying attention celebrities' lives. Of course, we have to pay attention our lives too. However, our lives might not be good rather than them on television. In fact, while many celebrities is shown on television, many average people can be felt depressions or frustrations because of beautiful celebrities' lives. These days, it is more clear for people to paying attention them.
To sum up, we today spend much time paying attention other people's lives. We want to be famous and have more money. Although their lives would be better, we will remember that our lives also are important.