These days, many women have been working and making a high profile in various fields. However, there are both bright side and dark side caused by mothers working. I would like to explain some advantages first, and then disadvantages later.
To begin with, mothers working makes their children have better social and personality adjustment at school. Children are likely to be affected by their parents, especially, mother. They are growing up watching their mothers independent, outgoing and hardworking. This experience help children grow up as active and sociable people.
Not only that but, children of working mothers are less likely to have stereotyped perceptions of life roles on the basis of being male and female. Until 60's, mothers tend to stay home and do all the chores. It stereotyped women as people in a lower position than man. However, since women started making money, there has not been any specific roles exist anymore. Therefore, children of working mothers are not likely to have fixed roles between male and female.
On the other hand, children of full-time working mothers tend to perform badly at school. Children need affection from their Moms. They would like to make sure if their mothers love them. This fact explains another fact that children often cry to catch attention to their mothers. But, when there is lack of mothers' roles at home, children are likely to long for mothers' loves, and try to attract mother's attention with bad behavior.
Last, children under working mothers have no morals on their thinkings and actions. They are brought up by day-care workers or baby sitters, instead of their parents. It causes children to learn nothing at home because of lack of parental supervision. Kids need to be told which is right and wrong while growing up and there is no one to teach morals to them.
With these reasons, mothers working has not only positive effects such as helping children get along with others well, but also negative effects such as making children behave bad.
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