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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. | |
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I do not agree with the topic which claims that television has affected communication among friends and family negatively. As television provides a host of information and entertaining information to talk with others, I believe it actually helps communication among fellows and family.
To begin with, television made it possible for people to receive information on various topics and fields. As media develops, more information is being shared with much more people. Nowadays, we know what famous politicians are doing, what new developments have been made, and what is going on at the opposite pole of each person's nation. As we are able to get more information thanks to television, now we have a lot of fascinating information to discuss with others.
Also, television provides many types of entertaining programs. Even though people watching these programs would have no or smidgen amount of conversation while watching the program, they will definitely have a lot of conversation with others after watching the program. When I look around on a street, I noticed that a lot of teenagers are talking about their famous celebrities' activities which were aired a few days ago. Although this type of conversation is not necessarily considered to be one of constructive conversations, but the fact that television provides a good material to talk with others is definite true.
Considering the fact that television can stimulate discussion by providing new and interesting materials, I believe that television is not a destroyer of communication, but an opener of more communication.
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저도 같이 조언부탁드려요 ㅋㅋ -_-;;
아직 어떤식의 형식으로 에세이를 쓰는지 조차 모르는데..여러분들의 조언을 기다리겠습니다 ^^