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Nowadays, people often want to work for the same company or employer for all of their entire lives. This is because finding a job is significantly difficult and also people prefer to live stably.stable life. In my standpoint, however, I strongly believe that it is unrealistic for people to expect to work for the lifetime job. As companies prefer to hire younger people than older people and also people usually accept the other company's better proposal.
It is obvious that people are getting older bit by bit. However, as people age, their abilities to work are decreased by degrees so that they loose their competitive power when they compete with younger employees. Due to the fact that younger people have latest educations, information and also they are physically stronger than the old, so a majority of older people should leave their companies and find other jobs. To illustrate this point, a older man who manages a small grocery shop nearby my house was once a employee of samsung enterprise which is one of the biggest and best companies around the world. However, he told me that as he became too old to work proficiently, his company made him to leave his company. He also claimed that all his personnels at that time are now doing other jobs due to the same reason.
Moreover, a great majority of people will easily accept the proposal which is offered by other companies, if that proposal provides better working environments and a salary. This is simply because people want to work in a better place which can produce better results and higher paying. For example, my father is a librarian in my town now since our family have moved to a new apartment. Before we moved to a new house, he was not a librarian who now works in a library nearby my house, but worked in other location library.library in different location. However, his present library tried to offer better condition for my father at that time and also that library is much closer to our home than his previous work place. Therefore, he decided to move his work place after he had considered all aspects.
After contemplating this issue with some instances, I fully agree that it is unrealistic for people to find lifetime jobs and work for their entire lives. The reason is that their companies constantly prefer to hire younger employees constantly. In other words, older people will be fired soon. In addition, people would easily change their work places if they got receive a better suggestion by other companies.
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