It is often said that television advertisings are very harmful to younger children.
Some people may oppose this statement because the advertisement can help children develop imagination. However, in my opinion, it is very bad for children to watch. The reason is that not only can advertisements give more sensational information, but they only focus on adult's needs and thinking methods.
To begin with, most advertisement companies give a lot of sensational information to attract public's interest. It is very harmful to growing children. These shocking information are not familiar with children. ( not familiar 를 강조하는 문장구조를 사용하기 보다는 다소 shocking할 수 있다는 얘기를 강조하기 위해서) The images could be somewhat shocking to children who are not familiar with them. So, If they watch these advertisement, they will be shocked the watching the scenes. According to the Broadcasting of Korea in 2007, 36 percent of advertisements recorded not good to children (recorded not good같은 구체적이지 못한 표현은 쓰지않는것이 좋습니다 :) was considered offending to children and the broadcast community gave warning about the contents. Studies have indicated that a lot of advertisement are perilous to children and teenagers. 3 months later, the Korean government let broadcast stations had to regulate sensational information. And then, our television had not been broadcasted for children. ??
Moreover, every advertisement focus on adult not children. If children see advertisements, they surely will feel that they are adults. It is caused unexpected problems such as teenage runaway and violences. It is very bad behavior to people.I think that it is the only a way that children are become accustomed to bad behaviors.
아이들이 광고를 보면 어른같다고 느낄것이다? 이것은 가출이나 폭력같은 문제를 야기한다. 이것은 나쁜 행동이다. 이것이 유일하게 아이에게 나쁜 행동을 버릇되게하는 방법이라고 생각한다.
제가보기엔 다소 비논리적이고 연결이 부족하다고 생각합니다.
For this reason, I strongly support my idea that we have to prevent children from seeing harmful scenes. For example, when I was an elementary student, I suffered a serious problems problem about a process of thinking. process of thinking이 무엇을 의미하는지 잘 모르겠네요 At that time, I saw an advertisement where a person shoot to shot other another person in order to take revenge. I was very shocked because of a lot of blood and screaming. So, I had to go to hospital to obtain expertise advices.
To sum it up, though everyone may hold a different position in this issue, I am in favor of my idea that adults have to deter children see advertisements of bad story. The main reasons are that advertisement companies give sensational information in order to obtain popularity, and they do only focus on adult not children. The importance of these drawbacks cannot be underestimated to survive in a modern society.
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