낚였다 생각하지 마시고 첨삭 부탁드립니다.. 전 미국에 살면서도 한국 해커스 게시판에 와서 첨삭 부탁드린다고 글 남기고 있어요.. 불쌍하다 생각하시고 첨삭 부탁드립니다 고수님들.. 게다가 아주 짧으니까요..
"If I cannot have freedom, I'd rater not be alive."
I don't know who used this statement first time, I'm firmly opposed about it. We are living in the society that is always forcing us to do something. At least, it is true that we are required to sacrifice for our society or family members since we have born. For instance, if I'm a father of family, I'm asked to earn money for our family's lives. Even if I'm working at the place where makes my life really miserable, I should stand it sometimes. And making a decision to quite the miserable job would be very tough if I start to consider the cost of my baby's diapers and mortgage on the house. Concerned as a member of society, it becomes more strict. There is no tolerance. You should keep the billions rules and follow the millions laws, or pay fines, otherwise, go to jail. Putting it succinctly, I want to ask whom mentioned about freedom. "How can you say like that even if we've never had it"
I don't know who used this statement for the first time, but I'm firmly opposed about it. We are living in the a society that is always forcing us to do something. At least, it is true that we are required to sacrifice for our society or family members since we have from the moment we are born. For instance, if I'm a father of a family, I'm asked to earn money for our family's lives. Even if I'm working at the a place where it makes my life really miserable, I should stand it sometimes. And making a decision to quit the miserable job would be very tough if I start to consider the cost of my baby's diapers and mortgage on the house. Concerned as a member of society, it becomes stricter. There is no tolerance. You should keep the billions rules and follow the millions laws, or pay fines, otherwise, go to jail. Putting it succinctly, I want to ask who mentioned about freedom. "How can you say like that even if we've never had it"
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