■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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▶ Topic :
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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▶ Your Answer :
Personally, I disagree that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Watching television can give us many information and entertaintments.
First, watching television give us many information. Through watch television programs such as TED and CNN News with friends and family, we can discuss many things that we saw together. Therfore, watching television has not destroyed communicatino among friends and family.
Second, watching television give us entertainments and this might bring us happiness. For example, watching Gag program or Dramas is really fun so people might talk together and share their joy through these programs, when the programs was finished or while the program was showing. Futhermore, television has not destroyed communication among friends and family.
In shorts, I strongly believe that today's television has not destroyed communication among friends and family.
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