▶ Your Answer : The reading passage contends that
reddish-brown rain which kerala experienced in 2001 can be explained by three
reasons. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points to contract
the reading passage.
First,
the lecturer suggests the likelihood that Bat's DNA occurred
red rain is far-fetched. If this bizarre weather is caused from death of migrating
bats, there should be remains of bats. However, a recent study revealed that
there was no significant amount of bones or wings of bats. This counters the
reading passage's claim that red rain came from mass death of bats migrating.
Secondly,
the lecturer asserts the chance of volcanic eruption resulting in red rain is
low. If the volcanic
eruption in the Philippines had been the real problem, then other countries such
as Thailand or Vietnam including Philippines itself would have undergone the
same phenomenon with what the kerala went through, red rain. This
rebuffs the reading passage's idea suggesting a volcanic eruption was the
reason of red rain happen.
Lastly,
the lecturer points out there were only a few of factories in Kerala. If chemical pollution had been
the issue, then other districts, especially city part, would have suffered from
red rain. This claim refutes the idea of the reading which suggests that
the combination of chemical products released from local factory and moisture
in the air results in red rain.
약간씩 문장 덜 끝낸 부분 조금 보입니다. 문장 다 적고 여러번 proof reading하면서 문법적 오류 없는지, 문장 연결 매끄러운지 여러번 체크하면 좋을 것 같습니다. 전체적으로 어휘 조금 더 다댱하게 적으면 좋을 것 같아요. 통합형의 경우 어휘가 어느정도 한정적이기 때문에 예를 들어 suggest같이 단어 2번씩 나오면 조금 어휘 다양성 아쉬워보입니다.
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