There has been an ongoing debate over whether or not people should have a job that gives us a lot of money. Many people, perhaps most, are against this stance that we should have a job which offers people a lot of satisfactions. However, others may assume that people must have work that gives us a lot of money. I agree with the latter position.
First of all, people should pursuit more and more money to of their work. I think money's advantages which are more powerful to people. Anyone surely needs money in order to survive. In a recent study, by Korea Occupation Association, people incline to select money rather than work's enjoyments when people consider their work. Actually, I also will select the a company that gives a lot of money.(give money라는 표현이 반복되는 것같은데, 같은 의미의 다른 표현도 바꿔주시면 좋을듯합니다.) This is because we do not have money that people suffer difficulty (이것은 일부에 해당되는 것이 아닌가 싶습니다. )and money is more difficult problems more than anything. So, I think that money is more important.
But, even the assumption above is very plausible, people who disapprove my idea may argue that
people should have the work that offers us satisfactions. If people are do not select the occupations that they like, they surely will have the feeling of regret. I totally concede this. Yet, I still put an emphasis on my idea because there is one more important matter to consider.
In my experience, when I was 13 years old, my father thinks that a lot of money gave our family happy life. And, The Happy life also gave him stable feelings. Therefore, a lot of money bring to us enjoyments.
To sum up, though everyone may hold a different positions on the issue, I am favor of my idea that people should consider a lot of money when they select their an occupation.
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