초등학생 스피치 영작 봐주고 있는데요,
제가 얼추 초안 썼는데 틀린 부분 어색한 부분이 있을거 같아서요
콕콕 찝어주시면 정말 감사하겠습니다. 그렇게 길지 않아요^^
My future dream is to be a chef for Korean food. I decided to be a chef for Korean food because I think it is fun to watch my mother cooking. My mother is the cook in my house. I am a good cook because I always look after my mom cooking.
To be a chef, first, I should study hard. That's because I have to attract a lot of foreigners with Korean traditional food. Second, I should have a lot of experiences related to cooking. For this, I am looking for Korean restaurants which serve awesome dishes without artificial flavors. (마지막 문장은 제가 글쓴이 의도대로 바꾼 건지 잘 모르겠네요... 지금 식당을 찾아보고 있다는 말이죠? )
If I became the best chef in Korea, I would bring honor to my nation, Korea. Also, I will share delicious dishes with poor people and will give a donation. And, I will make good dishes for my parents who sacrifice their lives for my sister and me.
My future dream might change as I grow up. However, now, I really want to be a famous chef. I will do my best to achieve my dream.
초딩치고는 치고 빠질 곳을 아는 군요... 내꿈은 아마도 바뀔 거 같지만 지금은 요리사가 되고 싶다라. ㅋㅋㅋㅋ