Some people have dabated People have debated about whether getting job in which you work with other people is better than getting job in which you work alone 생략해도 되고 써도 되는데 안쓰는게 자연스러울듯해서요:) → or not. Although working alone seems to be more flexiable, I strongly believe that getting a job in which you work with other people has greater advantages for the following reasons. First, you can learn a sense of reponsibility while working with other people. Second, working with others people is more time-efficient and faster in getting the work done.can be done more fast to complete works.
First of all, by working with other people, we can learn a sense of reponsibility. In other words, as they we work with other people, people tend to improve their have more improved sense of responsibility. Take my experience as an example. When I was a middle school student, I was lacked of sense of responsibility, so I always did not do can not be done what I had have to do. So, my ninth degree teacher in ninth grade had me join made a group study for me in oder to improve improving my sense of responsiblity as a group member. After studying with other people, I learned how to communicate and listen to other people's opinion. This is because I should cared had to consider about others, and do my role some parts of group work. As my experience illustrates, getting a job in which people work with other people help them to improve their a sense of reponsibility.
Second, by working with others people, we can save time and get our work done faster.do more fast anything. In fact, it may be ture that working alone is more time-efficient because we can do our task without hinderance. However, in large projects, it is more justifiable that to contend that heavy workloads are distributed within group members by working with other people. According to a study released by Korean Research Center, there was a correlation between the number of employees and time-efficiencyt. This is because people who work with other people could learn know-how and skills to complete work more easily. This study showed that working with other people is more time-efficient and more fast.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that getting job in which you work with other people has greater advantages than getting job in which you work alone. The rationale behind this is that it does is not only improve our a sense of reponsibility but also can be more time-efficient and fast.
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