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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice. | |
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Many experts of the developement theory claim that a gift timely given to children is beneficial for the children's developement. This assertion is followed by the question; which gift is the most more contributive for children? In my oppinion, books are the only answer to the this question.
First off, books can be an effective device of reinforcement which is important to correct correctify children's behavior. Kids can learn what is moral and what is recommendable behavior by being granted of gifts, which is called "positive possitive reinforcement." One of the element to evaluate the effect of gifts the reinforcement is how generous they gifts are, and in this point, books are recommendable because children just love them.
teach them moral values 하고 children love them하고 주장이 섞인것 같아요 ~ 한가지에 focus하면 더 좋을듯:)
Not only as the device for the correction, books also can educate children in various ways by itself. Different with other toys children play with, books help kids to improve their language, creativity and the ability of story telling. All of these effects are not easily acquired by other means, which additionaly confirmes the benefit of books.
Finally, books also contribute to the children's developement by bonding the ties between childrens and their parents. Especially, when kids are young, parents often read books to children in their arms. This is an effective way to convey their love to children and as a the result, children feel more safe safety and will become more mentally balanced.
For those the reasons I mentioned above, I firmly believe that books are the most beneficial gift for the youngs' developement, since they are amusing, educational, and teach family value. letting them joyness, education and family value. | |
통합형은 교재에 예제라도 많은데........... 독립형은 다 쓰고 나면 교재랑 너무 근거가 달라서 어떻게 바꿔야 할지도 잘 모르겠어요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ