It is generally said that gaining self-confidence is more important than specific knowledge. Some people disagree with the statement because knowledge is fundamental for students to solve various problems. I, however,(아무것도 없네요. 실수하신거같아요^^; I think, however, that 같은거요.) obtaining self-confidence plays a more critical role in success of one's life in the fast paced society.
To begin with, having self-confidence encourages people to deal with unexpected situations well, which can be the key to success. (예기치못한 "상황", "분위기" 같은 것들이 성공을 이끌어낸다고 하지않고, 보통 "실패" "좌절" "위기" 같은 것들이 성공으로 이어질수 있다고들하죠. troubling problems 라고하면 좋을것 같습니다. ^^)Everyone knows that we are in the world of ambiguity.(좀더 확실한 단어로 바꿔주시는게 좋을것 같아요.) In other words, we are supposed to might eventually be faced with meet with unexpected situations, for which we should be proactive. make a proactive decision.vigorously and proactively. Otherwise, we would might miss precious chances to achieve our goals. For example, I have two friends, Min and Sue. Both of them are diffrent in chracters. have opposite temperaments, One Min is with proactive attitude and enjoying challenges, another Sue is with timid very sensitive,(timid는 소심하다는것보다 겁쟁이라는 뜻입니다. 미국에서 소심하다는 표현은 없습니다. 예민하다고들하죠^^) sticking to manuals, and playing taking everything safely carefully. After college graduation, (대학,전문대학 이런뜻에서 컬리지가 아니라, 어느대학교1학년생이면 fresh man in college 라고합니다. university 는 특정한 어느학교이름 뒤에 붙는거구요, college가 대학들을 통틀어 뜻하는것입니다.^^)they began running their own businesses, and last year they were faced with(그냥 face라고 하면 맞서다라는 뜻이에요. 여기선 맞선게 아니라, 그 상황에 직면했다는거죠?) serious financial problems. Timid Sue was so frightened became desperate and gave it up quickly immediately, leaving too much debt on his hand. On the contrary, Min, a brave and confident fellow,(fellow는 아주 옛날말로 어른들만 가끔 쓰는말이에요. 보통은 dude라고들 합니다.^^) waited and searched for other opportunities. As a result, he accepted huge subsidy from the local government, and made his company even much(even을 쓰시려면 his 앞에 써주세요.) stronger. Likewise, strong mind set enables people to pursue his goal in spite of hardships.
On top of that, employers that search fresh, confident, and creative applicants are increasingly common. It dosen't (does not.) take genius to know that markets are changing so fast that many companies are trying to seek breakthrough(명사에요.) ways (무슨 방법인지 to 동사 하나 써주세요^^)more and more. Knowledge from books, however, is never good enough to get creative and innovative ideas. There is reliable research that reflects this phenomenon. According to the Ministry of Labor of Korea, seventy percent of interviews has been increaed, 70% of employers increased the portion of interview, which check applicant's proactive attitude. They also responded that they lower the portion of GPA and school brands. It implicates that cofident and proactive attitude of applicants will be become more crucial proficient in the future. job market.
To summarize what I mentioned above,(요약하자면, 요거 하나로 충분합니다. 위에서 말했던걸 요약하자면 이라고 말안하셔도 그냥 요약하자면, 이라고 하셔두되구요, 그게 훨씬 더 깔끔하고 좋은표현이에요^^) it is more important for teachers to help student gain self-confidence than to teach specific knowledge, considering decision making and future employment.(그냥 and ~ 하는게 더 낫습니다 이부분에선.) All in all, no one can deny the importance of self-confidence.
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