■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : 해커스 라이팅 교재 Track 7 about ' The hammerhead shark' |
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▶ Your Answer : In the set of issues, both the reading passage and the lecture discuss several aspects of whether the hammerhead shark's head is helpful for the hammerhead shark or not. the professor argues that the assertions made in the reading passage was wrong. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the hammerhead shark's head must have some elvolutionary merit. To begin with, in the response to the reading, the speacker discusses that the unique structure of the head does not strengthen its vision. specifically explanning, there is blind spot in front of the shark, and this can be drawback to rupture their prey. This contradicts the reading passage's claim that the shape of the head enhances vision. On top of that, the lecturer challenges the reading by stating that the structure of the shark's head also not afford it a better sense of smell. This because other sharks also have a good sesnse of smell. Furthermore, there are no sicentific study that the hammerhead shark have a better sense of smell than other sharks. The reading, however, states that the shape of its head gives the hammerhead a good sense of smell. Lastly, the lecturer contests the reading assertion by saying that it is not true that the hammerhead shark can turn quickly due to its head. The reason is that they do not actually use theirs head to steering. Instead, their flexible backbone is a real reason why they can turn quickly. this refutes the reading passage's claim that the shark's thin head help shape allows the animal to turn quickly.
In conclusion, the speaker challenges the explanation from the reading passage on account of the reasons stated above.
점수: 22 일단 지금 이 에세이는 두 가지 부분에 있어서 오류가 있습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩에 대한 부분을 한 문장만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 또한 통합형 에세이에서는 결론을 서술하면 안됩니다 수고많으셨습니다. |
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이렇게 완성했을시에 대충 점수가 어떻게 나올수있을지 예상도 부탁드려요,,