■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathmatics. | |
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Nowadays, a large number of people think stuying major courses, science and mathmatics, are more important than studying minor courses such as literature and history. However, I firmly believe studying for those minor courses are more important because
To begin with, language is an ultimate form of our nation. Ever since our nation exist, they improved their language up until now. Therefore we should learn our language thoroughly and be proud from our language. For example, my first language is Korean since I was born in South Korea. However, after the elementary school I moved to the foreign language that use different language. As a result, I am having a problem with some gramatical errors in Korean. What I am trying to say here is that even though I did not have to study Korean, I kept study within my limits because I thought it would be a shame, being not able to speak in your homeland's language.
Secondly, history is what makes the nation strong. For example, one of the current issue, Japan says that Dok-do island as their territory. Everyone knows that this is false except those who have learned in Japan. This is possible because Japan knew about the importance of history. Although they rewrote their history to fulfill their lies and people can easily find the correct one on the internet, most Japanese do not believe it since they have learned their history for long period of time.
To sum up, a language and history that is what makes a country become strong and proud. Therefore, I strongly believe that learning history and language should be the first priority in education. I am not saying math and science is not as important as these two, but I think during the elementary school, we should teach language and history to youth so we would be able to protect our country from those pathetic people like Japanese.
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