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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :When you go to college, would you prefer to live in university dormitories or in apartments in th ecommunity? Give reasons for your preference. | |
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When students have to choose where they live in, there are several options. OR Students have many different criterions in choosing where to live. standards individually. In fact, I have lived both in university dormitory and apartment near by school. As per for my experiences, I believe that university dormitory is a better place for students to live in. This is due to the fact that most dormitories provide security programs and there are a lot of amenities around the dormitory.
Above of all, dormitory usually has a program that protects students from some dangers. Nowadays, cruel crimes often occur in school zone thus many students feel insecure even in the campus. dreadful. Especially female students are more likely to fall victim to these crimes. However, in dormitory, there are a lot of janitors who patrol the campus. When I lived in an apartment, I came across an sexual harasser abnormal person in the corridor of the apartment. He tried to touch my body and made me scared. But but there was no one who helped could help me. If I had experienced the same happening in dormitory, janitors probably would have helped me probably. Not only that, but every dormitory has rules roles to keep that maintains the order. Students are not allowed to go out at late night and they also shouldn't smoke in the building. All these rules roles give students fresh and safe environment.
Another reason I prefer dormitory is that, students can easily reach might reach easily diverse amenities. Around the dormitory, there are many conveniences such as the post office, health clubs, coffee shops. Even those amenities in school Moreover, they sell products and provide service to students in a cheap price. far cheaply. Also, some amenities are only for residents of dormitory. For example, when I lived in dormitory, I could use health club at no cost. So I and my roommate enjoyed working out everyday but one of my friend who lived in an apartment had to register to an expensive health club. In this sense, living in a dormitory is more advantageous. profitable.
Therefore, I think that living in dormitory has bulk of advantages. What I mentioned above is only the tip of an iceberg. Even except what I mentioned above, there are huge assets. So if I have to choose again, I would absolutely choose the dormitory without hesitation. | |
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