185 You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
People would want to make more money from a house or a business. I also would like to make more money if I have enough money for a house or starting a business. People would choose the one that is easier for them to raise extra money. For me, since I am not a good businessman, I would rather buy a house and wait till its price goes up.
I have heard that running a business can make lots of money for a short time. However, I have also seen some people who could not make their goal as a businessman. For example, my high school friend, she started this online clothing shop with her sister. They put lots of effort and tried to make money but I think they did not have good strategies to make people interested. After a year, they had to stop selling and as a result lost lots of money. I have not studied anything about business and I know I would make the same mistakes as they did.
House. I think it is more safe and easier way to earn money. You don’t have to spend lots of time or put lots of effort like running business. You just buy a house and then don’t have to worry about anything. You can live in that house or you can rent. My mother, when she saved some money, she decided to buy a small house. Because Seoul is a big city, there are so many people and most of them want their own house. The housing price goes up slowly or fast sometimes. She bought that house and just had it about for 3 years and the price has gone up to twice as much as the actual price she paid 3 years ago. If you have insight to pick a right one or if you don’t think you are a good businessman, buying a house would be a lot better.
A house and a business both can make money but what to choose depends on the person. Some people might want to be adventurous. In my case, however, I prefer to buy a house because it is safer and easier.
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