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■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Do you prefer to shop in large supermakets, malls, and department stores, or would you rather shop in samller, more intimate businesses?
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Those who don't like go far distance from home might say that using small shops in the vicinity of home is more comfortable and better than using big stores far from hame. However, I think that the advantages of using big stores faroutweight the disadvantages. There are two major reasons.
First, large supermakets is very big and have all things we usually use. When we go there, we can buy whatever you want from grocery to home appliances. This advantage is appropriate for poeple these days. As society is getting more complexed, the things we need also increased. For example, there are a lot of food from other countries and inventions like computer, mobilephone, PSP we can barely see those things in small shops. Threrfore, the solution of this phnomenom is going to the big supermakets and department stores. And there, we easily choose whatever we want at one place.
More importantly, we can get much service and profit from large markets. There are many staffs. So we can search something to need by asking to staff. In addition, if i unsatisfy some items and find a fault, We will just talk to staff and then they will kindly clean that problems by paying back and exchanging.Also they provide special prices because large supermakets get a profit through selling a lot of things at low prices. We can save much money in the big stores. We can killing two birds that are service birld and material bird with one stone.
For these two reasons above, I think large shops is the most suitable place to buy an object in these developted world which is filled with a lot of materials. The image led by the cheap price and good service is big store's strength. No one can deny the importance of the big supermakets and malls. | |
Those who don't like to go far distance from home might say that using small shops in the vicinity of home is more comfortable and better than using big stores far from home. However, I think that the advantages of using big stores far outweigh the disadvantages. There are two major reasons.
First, large supermakets (spelling error) supermarkets are very big and have all things everything we usually use. When we go there, we can buy whatever you we want from grocery to home appliances. This advantage is appropriate for poeple people these days. As society is getting more complex, the things we need also increased. For example, there are a lot of food from other countries and inventions like computer, mobile phone, PSP we can barely see those things in small shops. Threrfore Therefore, the solution of this phnomenom phenomenon is going to the big supermarkets and department stores. And there, we easily choose whatever we want at one place.
More importantly, we can get much service and profit from large markets. There are many staffs. So we can search something to need by asking to the staff. In addition, if I unsatisfy am not satisfied with some items and find a fault, we will just talk to staff and then they will kindly clean that problems by paying back and exchanging I can easily exchange the product for a new one. Also they provide special prices because large supermakets supermarkets get a profit through selling a lot of things at low prices. We can save much money in the big stores. We can kill two birds that are service birld and material bird with one stone with one stone because we will both gain service and quality items.
For these two reasons above, I think large shops are the most suitable place to buy an object in these developted developed world which is filled with a lot of materials. The image led by the cheap price and good service is the advantage (strength) of large malls is big store's strength. No one can deny the importance of the big supermakets supermarkets and malls.