It is a ongoing debate over whether other creatures exist out of earth in the universe. In this respect, some say that exploring outer space is important. Other say that we live in 'reality' , it's unvisiable so it is not valuable to discuss. However, I strongly support the statement that governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space for the following reasons.
To start with, exploring outer helps people give a chance to find alternative energies. This is because outer space might have a amazing sources.However, the government does not take actions right away, some countries will be relatively behind. Besides, natural sources are depleting litte by litte. Especially, our country depends on the usage of gas seriously. Now, the gas's price is continuouslly increasing. In near future, we might not afford high-priced gas. In this regard, the finding of alternative energy is unavoidable. Thus, governments would better invest as much money as they can.
In addition, it is possible to find new places to live for people. In other words, especially conuntries which have narrow territories can have extra spaces out of earth. To illustrate, korea's population is around fifty millions but our country is comparatively small so it is very crowded. Therefore, if our government attempt to exploring the outerspace and find the possible area to live, it will be helpufl to have better lives.For example, thanks to some advaced countries government, people have disclosed the facts about Earth. if people keep putting same amount of effort in exploring outer space, people apparently will discover the incredible facts. In this aspect, it 's not evadable that there is a optimal condition for human being.
As I have mentioned above, it is time to take strong actions to find better places and alternative energy sources from outer space. Thus, without any hesitation, I support that governments should spend as much money possible exploring outer spaces. In the long run, people are capable to have more ideal lives than expected. |
It is an (a,e,i,o,u, 로 시작하는 단어 전에는 a 대신 an~ ) ongoing debate over whether other creatures exist out of earth in the universe. In this respect, some say that exploring outer space is important. Other say that we live in ‘reality’, its unvisiable invisible (이거 말고 따른 단어 말씀하시는 거였으며 죄송…) so therefore (so 도 말이 되지만 TOEFL essay쓴때에는 so, stuff, things처럼 informal 한 단어 보다는 다른 단어가 더 적합한듯해요) it is not valuable to discuss. However, I strongly support the statement that governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space for the following reasons.
To start with, exploring outer helps people give a chance to find alternative energies. This is because outer space might have an amazing source. However, the government does not take actions right away; some countries will be relatively behind. Besides, natural sources are depleting little by little. Especially, because our country depends on the usage of gas seriously. Now, the gas price is continuouslly continuously increasing. In the near future, we might not be able to afford high-priced gas. In this regard, the finding of alternative energy is unavoidable. Thus, governments would better should invest as much money as they can.
In addition, it is possible to find new places to live for people. In other words, especially conuntries countries which have narrow territories can have extra spaces out of earth. To illustrate, Korea's population is around fifty million but our country is comparatively small so it is very crowded. Therefore, if our government attempts to explore the outer space and find the possible areas to live, it will be helpful to have better lives. For example, thanks to some advanced countries government, people have disclosed the facts about Earth. If people keep putting the same amount of effort in exploring outer space, people apparently will discover the incredible facts. In this aspect, it’s not evadable that there is an optimal condition for human being.
As I have mentioned above, it is time to take strong actions to find better places and alternative energy sources from outer space. Thus, without any hesitation, I support that governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer spaces. In the long run, people are capable to have might gain more ideal lives than expected.
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