In brief, not only car fumes affect the environment, but it (앞에 car fumes를 가리키는 건가용?) also causes a number of diseases to human. and Finally, it results in premature deaths every year. By using electric buses, commuters actually could take advantages (이것만 쓰면 될것같아서) of them such as saving fossil fuels and reducing emissions. Moreover, it is necessary that the government should become aware of the benefits of using electric buses and encourage the continuing development in electric public transportations in order to promote public’s frequency of electric buses instead of their own vehicles and save the planet.
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